Yesterday we asked Ms Blackborow to look at our film, and she said "it's really impressive!". She also said that she no longer sees it as a student film and so isn't watching for continuity errors, but instead thinks of it as a real piece of film. She found it very frightening, and at one point put her hands over her eyes saying "this is really disturbing". This made us very happy :-)
We have to make a few small adjustments, and come up with a title, but we're nearly there!
- make a larger dissolve between the "submit" shot and the first shot of amelia and overlap the shots
- separate the ghosted shot and make it two shots
- move the first log in shot to straight after the company logo
- alternately have titles and clips
- fade down copmpany logo
- warm up shot of king
- put drone on
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